Hi Tamati! I really like your simile's. They were despcriptive and thoughtful! I have also done simile's for the Summer Learning Journey, but they were about a zoo. Maybe next time you could use correct pronouns i.e. 'a' instead of 'the'. Other than that, it was awesome! Bye, from Ella.
Hi Tamati! I really like your simile's. They were despcriptive and thoughtful! I have also done simile's for the Summer Learning Journey, but they were about a zoo. Maybe next time you could use correct pronouns i.e. 'a' instead of 'the'. Other than that, it was awesome! Bye, from Ella.
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